JustMeNathalie

I shall never be free. Oh, wow. Love how this ends. Even though it's a depressing ending, I still like it. Great job. :) Keep writing! -JustMe

Aw, very cute! I was smiling the whole time I read this. (: It is pure, and carefree and beautiful. ^I've had a lot of a favorite lines from stories/poems ...

Beautifully heartbreaking. The love for his wife is so wonderful and how he cared for her and wanted her to be okay... it's so sad! And the way you wrote ...

Hello! You are getting me addicted to your novella. (: I love your characters so far. Though it hasn't been long to get to know the characters; they are great ...

Hello! You've go a great story beginning here. And the topic of mermaids for your story is really genius. There isn't much of those stories out there and I'm glad ...

Hello! I'm here to review as you requested (sorry it took so long!). This was a great beginning. And I think that if you ever finish this you should try ...

Wow. This is really ... just, wow. This is so sad. The saddest part for me was " She sleeps in the ground but of course her true beauty was ...

Hello! It's interesting and I think this story could really turn into something. Here are a couple things I noticed: - It confused me a little in the beginning. I ...

The title totally drew me to this poem. What a great poem it is too! Each verse kept drawing me back in. I totally agree with Ash. As she put ...

Hello, veritas! :D I like it. It's... well, nothing like I've read before. They pierce through my flesh and leave my heart bleeding. ^ Love, love, LOVE this line! It's ...

Wow. I agree with KaylaCoon. You did a superb job and it was a great read. Before leaving, I took out that photo and gave one long, final look at ...

You are such an amazing writer. "Moonlight" is a beautiful poem. I don't even know how to explain how much I love it. I'm speechless. You have created a WONDERFUL ...

Wonderful. It made me really want to see a ballerina dance in person. The imagery was, I thought, amazing. "The Ballerina" was really wonderful. Sorry if this isn't a very ...

When I first read the title, I instantly clicked the link to your story and I'm glad I did. :) It's great! It's totally a story I would see in ...

Hello there! First off, this is a very interesting poem. I haven't really read any thing like this before. So, good job with that. (: I’ve had this thought In ...