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Hello, Sebastian! This piece is great, it really does capture how it feels to people-watch. It also captures the kinds of thoughts that run through our heads when we watch ...

This is quite beautiful, and sounds like a diary entry, or a letter (not sure if you meant to do this.) I wish I was a princess And not a ...

Hello Adelaide, Overall, this is a great story, however, I do have some suggestions. First: In the prologue it says that Comet frightened the horses, you might want to clarify ...

I really like this poem because it feels realistic and like something many people can relate to. So full of life So... Different I can't feel it The emotion isn't ...

This poem is very beautiful, and I think it really captures the feeling of want. As human beings, we always want what we can't have. It could be love, a ...

I spent that afternoon bandaging my shoes up with duct tape. The podiatrist had recommended it for the heels, which had holes widening to the size of tunnels by now, ...