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Re: Out of the Nursery
Hey Kylan! June here! Oh, Kylan, why are all of your stories morbid but so addictive? XD I don't have much to say on this; I cannot ever critique your ...
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Re: She's a Fairytale
Linkitty-Caterpillar! Juniper here! =] So! It's been a good century since you last posted, right, right? Let's have a stab! I sighed and remembered why I was here in the ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: Into The Depths [Prolouge]
Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I'm June your reviewer for the moment. Before I begin, I want to say that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: When I See Your Eyes
Hey there! June here! Welcome to YWS! Before I begin your review, I just want to tell you that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy which means that for every ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: The Butterfly Effect
Hey Serendipity! June here! I really enjoy the structure of the poem as well as the opening. flashing across solar system’s planes we venture to the end of expansion • ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Love
Hey there Marine Dancer! June here! Two things first! It's best to just copy and paste the text of the poem into the thread since many people who review may ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Pain
Hey there Winter! June here! Thanks for the review on my poem, To Lily . Glad you liked it. Let's have a look at your poem here: Some may think ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Parallel
Hey Doogzie! Juniper here! =] You haven't been around much at all lately. :P *gold stars* So, the first thing that stood out to me here was your imagery. It ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: No More
Hey there Zinnia! Juniper here! =] Tears fall quick, As melted wax, That hardens On the floor. So, while this is an interesting start to the poem and all, I ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Island Tide
Hey Gahks! Juniper here! =] You've got quite a review from Galeri as well as Hannah; I'll just stick with my overall thoughts. I truly like the mood of this; ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: The Night of Forever
Hey Adam! Juniper here! :twisted: I told you I'd review this. And, just a little note; you misspelled poem in your subtitle. Peom should really be poem. *is nitpicky* Speaking ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Needing you.
Hey Kris! June here! Okay, at first glance, this poem looks strangely innocent and sweet, but as we come to the end, it's almost... evil. At the end here, you ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: She
Hey there Rodhead! June here! :) Mars has covered some of the important stuff that I would have touched on, so here's my two cents: At dusk there will be ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: I'm so, so sorry
Hey there Flem! June here =] This poem is brilliant. Very strong with emotion and excellently written. I won't even touch on nitpicks at all. I agree with Juicebox; starting ...
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Re: Broken Bottles
Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. ;) Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, ...
May 29, 2009
