Juniper

Hi Kylan! June here! So sorry for taking so long to get to this. :P I love this. It's so beautiful, and very peaceful-- compared to your other poems, I ...

Hi Kylan! I love, love, love how this story begins in fragmented pieces of information (which consists of sentence fragments as well), but as we read on, everything becomes clearer, ...

Hey Tiff, June here! So, as I told you the other day, I had a review for this done on my flash drive, but either my computer or flash drive ...

Don't drag up old posts unless you're asked to; it pushes the newer words back into the forum, and annoys the author if they've improved since posting. :P In the ...

Aloha Aushy! Juniper here! I feel so bad! I really should have gotten to this sooner so that you could read the reviews before you left, but presumably it's too ...

Hi Galleri! Juniper here! Sadly, I do not have much to say about this poem, although it's so brilliantly done. Only little nitpick I have with this is: (they'll planta ...

Hi Lord! Welcome to YWS, I'm June-- Juniper to some, Grain, Juno, Junior-- whatever, basically! The point is, I'm your critic for the moment. If I'm too nitpicky, too harsh, ...

Hi youreit! I'm June, your critic for the moment and I am going to run over this for you. So, to begin, I did not find your story terribly written. ...

Locked. Same story has been posted in Action/Adventure here: If you'd like me to move your piece to Romantic Fiction, PM me and let me know.

Hey there! June here! The first thing I noticed about this story was that it is centered around a child. However, the voice that it's told in is not child-like ...

Hey there! Juniper here! So, I think this poem is a cute, creative start, but it's honestly easy to see that you are pushing the poem for rhyme and rhyme ...

Hey! June here! I rarely review lyrics due to their tricky nature, but I noted that this doesn't have any reviews, so I'll have a stab. Anyway! I would really ...

Hey Kat! June here! Awwww! This is such a pretty, pretty poem. Poems relating to Nature are my favorite and win me over easily. So, let's see! I enjoyed the ...

Hey Mage! June here! So sorry, it always takes me long to get to reviews. One thing: YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, meaning that you should write two reviews ...

Hi Alyss! June here! Welcome to YWS! How's it for you so far? I'm really bad at reviewing lyrics, but here I go! I was able to get a sense ...