Juniper

Hilo Hailey! I don't much like the usage of Bold words; it's okay for titles and such, but not really the entire poem. It's almost like you're screaming it at ...

Hi Evi! June here! Little note: Using the underscores in white shows on chimped out and on the homepage; instead to get those spaces, hold down ALT and press 255 ...

Hi Bow! So! As I mentioned on your other poem, your punctuation is a bit off. No space before the punctuation mark, dear. I think that this poem was pretty ...

Hi Bow! June here! :) To start, your rhyme scheme was a bit rough-- I think in some places it could use polishing, in a sense that you should eliminate ...

Hi Awake! I think that you have a wonderful ability to create lines that raise vivid pictures in our heads. I see that in your poem here you have some ...

Hi there, June here! :) So! Overall, I found this a very sweet poem. I loved how the end of it turned to hopeful things, and didn't close in a ...

:O Eric! I can't believe I haven't read this! Anyway, this is wonderful; absolutely, absolutely wonderful. The tone of this somewhat reminded me of Annabelle Lee by Edgar Alan Poe. ...

Hi, Lilchoma! June here! :) While I strongly like some of the imagery you used throughout this, something in this poem gives me the idea that it's not standing out ...

Hi Suspenz I'm June, your critic for the moment. ;) So! I really enjoy how you use slang here to achieve a rhythm and tone. However, there are a few ...

Hi Silented! Adna has done a rather fabulous indepth review on this, so to spare you the repetition, I'm just going to do a sort of overall. ;) I do ...

Hi Keep A Secret! I'm June =) One of the main things about this poem that stands out to me is the fact that you're relying on rhyme for your ...

Hi Monument, June here! I've missed reading your poetry lately. :) Haven't seen you around much. To be honest, I do not like this poem. It's a touchy subject, and ...

Hi Galeri! June here! So, I'm terribly sorry that I did not get to this sooner/when it was mentioned; I was trying to finish up a few things before I ...

Oh, Hawkie! How absolutely, astonishingly cute of you! This was totally, beautifully, wonderfully excellent! I love it! The symbolization of roses was wonderful and coupled with the careless rhyme, it

Shiiina, I absolutely love your poetry. It just dances with youth and happiness and reminds me of years ago. One of the main thing I love about your work is ...