Juniper

Hey x3, This brought to mind a warzone, and for the oddest of reasons I can't explain, I'm a huge fan of war poetry. I enjoyed the images you used ...

Hey Autumn, June here, I think that this poem has a nice load of potential packed into it, but there are several aspects of it that have dragged it down, ...

Hey there, June here, Nice work on this. I think that you still have room and potential to build and expand with this. I enjoy the theme, the unliving living ...

Demsy! I wrote a review and YWS ate the beginning. :( Anyway, I was saying, that this poem makes me happy for plenty of reasons -- one being that you're ...

Hi, Harmony girl! June here, I enjoyed how you kept an even line length throughout the poem. I'm not sure that bringing them to a full stop at the end ...

Good day, Kevo, I'm June, I found this piece inspiring. The entire thing came together and whispered of hope and happy things, and I think that as far as the ...

Hey there, I stand under the impression that poems to release feelings are a good way to ventilate at times, as it gives us something else to focus on without ...

Hi there, Ashley, June here, I believe that in the title and first line of this poem, the word you want to use is breathe, as in the act of ...

Hello, Tenyo, June here, On first read, this poem reminded me of a painting that I have of a rainy street in Paris. I'm not quite sure why, but I ...

Hi, Dante! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. :) As with any piece of writing, you've room for improvement in this poem. This is the type of poem that ...

Conradio! So, I've been an absentee for about half a year now, and I think it's fair to say that I'm rusty in all the wrong places at reviewing. Criticizing ...

Kylan, There were only a few things that stood out to me as worthy of a correctional eye in this narrative, which I'll point out momentarily. I think you did ...

Kylan, Like most of your works go, there's a sense of relative familiarity in this poem that almost any reader can relate to, and I think that's one of the ...

Jon, I've been reading a lot of classic American poets, like T.S Elliot, e. e. cummings, and others that one would commonly find in a schoolbook anthology. I find that ...

Rossie! In one of my first memories ever, Just say "One of my earliest memories". ;) The worst reaction I've ever had from a hearing person was discomfort. From a ...