Juniper

Hey, niteowl, June here, I'm a bit torn on how I feel about this piece as a whole. I enjoy this for its simplicity and neatness in its language; you ...

Bonjour, Mindblown, June here, I enjoyed this poem for the tiny ray of hope it lends to the baby bird at the end of the poem. It's very cute and ...

Heya Fortis, June here again! I like this poem for the build up it gives in anticipation of hearing a story, but I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t ...

Hi, Eden, June here! :) I got the impression that this poem was trying to tell us something, but I feel like the message is inhibited and not well delivered. ...

Hi there! I'm June. :) I liked this poem. I like the opening line, "The Brain/ works in many ways", because it precedes the body of the poem with a ...

Well, Hello there! I'm June! It's been a bit of a while since I've reviewed something without only being a critic and I can be pretty harsh sometimes, so bear ...

Truth? I've adored your poetry for a while now. I don't think I've ever torn one of yours apart, though, and frankly, for such a beautiful thing, I'm not sure ...

Daisy! June here, just as I promised, I sat down the wind blowing through my hair. Sometimes I swore wind was alive, breathing heavily, mad at something. " Buckle up," ...

Hi, Fire, I'm June, This poem as it is isn't doing anything for me. I can tell what it is that you're trying to get at here, but to be ...

Hi foreveralone, I'm June :) I thought this was pretty cute. It took me a second read, though, to recognize the rhyme in here, and because it's not constant with ...

Hey there, Flower, It's been a really long while since I've read some of your work and I think you've most certainly improved. I don't like this particular poem, though, ...

Well, hello hello. What have we here, (This is a totally unrelated, unrelevant, useless comment, but the opening line to this made me think of that Written in the Stars ...

Hey Coter, June here, I like the sun. It comes with it its warm, loving arms like its powerful yet healing rays. I really like the sun. It is the ...

Oh my goodness, if this didn't make my day, it made my year. This was... I don't even know. Goodness. I knew the Sesame Street characters weren't all the innocent ...

Hey there, June here, I'm going to have to go after Greenwitch here and say that there wasn't anything particularly interesting about this particular love story. We commonly find stories ...