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Re: I Write Instead Of Speak
Thanks for the review. I get your confusion as this poem really only tells part of the story, but I intend to tell the rest soon. So if you want ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: I Write Instead Of Speak
Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: I Write Instead Of Speak
Thanks for the review. A lot of it is contradictory, but that has to do with the overall message of a series of poems I'm writing. That's also why the ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Graves
Thanks for the wonderful review!!! This was based on stuff happening in my life and was written in that moment before I really was able to process much more than ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Graves
Thanks for the review, I think you interpreted my poem in an interesting way, that really different, but cool. For me, it has nothing to do with death. The idea ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Pulling At Me
Thanks for the review. I wrote this very quickly at first so I didn't pay much attention to capitalization etc. But, that's something I definitely will be adding.
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Pulling At Me
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Pulling At Me
Thanks for the review, I do struggle with punctuation, as I am quite new to poetry. I agree that this poem doesn't really have an ending, it really is just ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Dresses and Politics: Prologue
Thanks for the review it was very helpful, I always miss a bunch of things when I try to edit. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, it is my third ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Title: Chapter One
Its supposed to be a bit confusing because she doesn't know where she is. How she got there will be explained more later on as she learns because this is ...
Jun 2, 2017 -
Re: Little Princess
Hey, wow this is amazing.
May 31, 2017 -
Re: The Child House Chapter 2
Thanks for the review it was lots of help. This is more of an info dumpy chapter and so I'll try to lessen that, but its kinda important after the ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: The Child House Chapter 2
Thanks for the review it was lots of help. This is more of an info dumpy chapter and so I'll try to lessen that, but its kinda important after the ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: The Child House Chapter 1
Thanks!
Feb 7, 2017 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 5
Thanks again. The idea of Jackson being her romantic interest would definitely be strange, him being less than half her age and all. I guess that I might have not ...
Nov 16, 2016
