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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Write Instead Of Speak

    Thanks for the review. I get your confusion as this poem really only tells part of the story, but I intend to tell the rest soon. So if you want ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Write Instead Of Speak

    Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Write Instead Of Speak

    Thanks for the review. A lot of it is contradictory, but that has to do with the overall message of a series of poems I'm writing. That's also why the ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Graves

    Thanks for the wonderful review!!! This was based on stuff happening in my life and was written in that moment before I really was able to process much more than ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Graves

    Thanks for the review, I think you interpreted my poem in an interesting way, that really different, but cool. For me, it has nothing to do with death. The idea ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pulling At Me

    Thanks for the review. I wrote this very quickly at first so I didn't pay much attention to capitalization etc. But, that's something I definitely will be adding.

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pulling At Me

    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pulling At Me

    Thanks for the review, I do struggle with punctuation, as I am quite new to poetry. I agree that this poem doesn't really have an ending, it really is just ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Dresses and Politics: Prologue

    Thanks for the review it was very helpful, I always miss a bunch of things when I try to edit. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, it is my third ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Title: Chapter One

    Its supposed to be a bit confusing because she doesn't know where she is. How she got there will be explained more later on as she learns because this is ...

    Jun 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Princess

    Hey, wow this is amazing.

    May 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Child House Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review it was lots of help. This is more of an info dumpy chapter and so I'll try to lessen that, but its kinda important after the ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Child House Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review it was lots of help. This is more of an info dumpy chapter and so I'll try to lessen that, but its kinda important after the ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Child House Chapter 1

    Thanks!

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 5

    Thanks again. The idea of Jackson being her romantic interest would definitely be strange, him being less than half her age and all. I guess that I might have not ...

    Nov 16, 2016


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