Junel

Hey there! I'll admit I don't usually review poetry because it's not really my thing. However, this one is just so amazing I couldn't not say something. I clicked on ...

Hey there! Interesting little chapter you've got here. First some nitpicks: 1. The shifty man says I feel like this is a good example of one of the main areas ...

Hey there! Another great chapter overall. I really like your descriptive style lots of strong and kinda poetic stuff in here. My nitpicks and suggestions: 1. Abigail, darling! Ok two ...

Hey there! Side note: I didn't notice that this story had a prologue until after I finished reading this chapter and I was finalizing my review. I gave it a ...

Hey there! I shall preface this review with the fact I'm jumping into your story from the middle so while the plot definitely seems intriguing I shall focus my review ...

Hey there! Well, I definitely relate to this one (as would most people on this website, to be honest). I'm one of those people who can't go anywhere without a ...

Hey there! First, my nitpicks and suggestions as I read (I bold what needs to be changed): 1. There were two of them in front of her, delete: unnecessary 2. ...

Hey there! This topic is one I personally believe everyone should not only stop to think about but should work to make educated choices in order to help save our ...

Hey there! An interesting story you have here, and I'm glad not to live in it. First my nitpicks and suggestions: into school today 'today' is not necessary and can ...

Hey there! This is very cool, you set a clear scene, give personality to your character(which can be hard in short stories), and even have a bit of surprise thrown ...

Hey there! I love this, but be forewarned that my comments may come off as harsher than I intended. Because you seemed to want in-depth criticism and it is already ...

Hey there! This poem is beautiful. You are able to clearly show not just the story but also the emotions of your work. I personally feel there are two very ...

Hey there! I love the idea of your story and plan on moving on to the first and second chapter as soon as I finish reviewing this. Normally I would ...

Hey there! This is definitely an important topic and you provide a lot of information for the reader. First my nitpicks and suggestions: (I bold what needs to be changed) ...

Hey there! Woah. Yep, this is just plain amazing. You spend a good amount of time building up the 'facts' about what the crystal mask can mean, but you keep ...