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Wow. I loved it! It was very simple, but the message was as clear as a bell. I'm speechless! Keep on writing!!

I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading this. It was amazing! A very nice prolouge it was organized perfectly, ad you've set yourself up for a novel ...

Wow! That was an awesome read!

I really liked it! It made tear up a little bit towards the end. You kept the rhyming consistent, as far as I know. But, overall it was a very ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It kind of gave me the creeps, which is a good thing. You really locked the reader in, and made them fill your characters ...

Wow, that was really good. I couldn't stop reading watch for that last line you forgot a quotation mark, but that's the only grammar problem I saw. I really enjoyed ...

It was good. I couldn't stop reading, it was very short and simple, which to me is a good thing. So, overall great story! keep on writing!

Oh my gosh! I loved it! There were a couple of typos in there that you might need to look over. But, good diction, strong voice throughout the piece. Overall ...

WOW! That's an amazing poem. I loved it, but not about the part about me going to Hell now that I read this awesome poem! Eh, C'est la vais. (I ...

I liked it. It was simple, yet powerful, and those are always the best kind of poems.

YOU GO GIRL!!!!!! GIRL POWER!!!!!! I loved this poem! I'm with you girl! It all made sense, and it sends a message to all that just because we're woman, doesn't ...

I was hilarious! I couldn't stop giggling. It flowed wonderfully, and I couldn't ask you to change a thing! Keep on writing!

Cute. Just plain cute. I LOVE YWS!

I really liked it. It was short and sweet and still managed to have some beauty. Keep on writing!

I loved it! It made me want to cry! But a lot of the time you seem to be using he's instead of his. It flows better. But, other than ...