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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stranger

    I was a little confused with the hush, hush thing going on there. Or is the reason for that a hush, hush topic ; ). Anyways, loved it! I liked ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Letter to the World

    NOW I GET IT! I have one friend that cuts because her father abused her over one summer in Texas. She developed P.T.S.D. (post traumatic stress disorder), and she used ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poet's soul

    Normally I figure out if poem was written by a professional by how long it takes me to figure out what it's actually saying. Your poem took me awhile, so ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: "Ballerina" The first Chapter (edited)

    I LOVED this story! mainly because I'm a dancer myself. I enjoyed how it takes place in France, and all the ballet terms were used, and spelled correctly. There are ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    I've had a good number of friends who were on the verge of doing such a thing. It's scary to me, but to them it almost seems like the only ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fireworks

    I liked this poem. In school this year i read a novel called "The Absolutely True Diaries of a Part-Time Indian." Talk about a book that will make you cry! ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: This is not a Love Poem

    I loved it! It reminds of home during the summer time. My fun summers that were care free and awesome. It reminds me of being outside in the middle of ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Lost, Chapter 1

    I really liked the story! It flowed nicely, and had good dialogue. Prepare for nitpicking! You have some phrases of dialogue that are ended incorrectly. Some phrases of dialogue are ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Forget.

    When it comes to books or poetry, I'm hardcore. I never cry, scream, I barely even giggle. But, your story made me want to cry and cry and cry. It ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Love Hurts

    I don't know about the rest of the world, but I like poems that are short, sweet and to the point. Normally, when I read poems I'm spending 20 minuets ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No More Judging

    That is so true! I absolutely LOVED your poem. I know how you feel when it comes to judging people. I get judged a lot myself, and truth be told ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Everlasting War: Pre-Recorded Times Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed your story. Your style of writing reminds me of how a good friend of mine writes. Very formal, which is a good thing. I enjoy it when ...

    Jul 11, 2011


Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
— Joseph Campbell