JuliasSneezer

Wow. Thanks! :D

Thank you so much! If you want, (and you totally don't have to, I was just wondering in case perhaps you'd like to check out any future chapters, but you ...

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this review. :D

Oh, it does! Thank you so much. I'm just going to have to go ahead and edit this later on. Thank you for your input. :D

Hello! Thanks for the review. I understand the confusion, but unfortunately all four of those new characters are important. I'll try and figure out a way to make that easier, ...

Thanks!

Yupperdoodle! But I'm not a fan of this... ambiguity. XD

I've decided for this to become a prologue. Thanks so much for the kind words! Plus, you've provoked a few scenarios for me to include. Thank you much! :D

Thanks! I think I will explore this idea a bit more, but I'll write it in a while for want of the best characters, background, and worlds possible.

@CateRose17 ARGH, YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU FIXED MY CONFIDENCE! I NOW FEEL SO GOOD ABOUT 'THE CAVE' OH MY GOSH! Thank you so much for the kind ...

Thanks for the compliments on the opening. I had no idea how everyone else would persieve it, so it's nice to have an opinion. Also, thank you for mentioning how ...

Oh! Well, if you ever upload it, it sounds like an interesting read! Please do make sure to lemme' know if you ever upload it!

Thank you much! And this was Julia's reaction from Gabriel's sudden sprinting. :)

Yush! :D

Fixed it! :D