JoytheBrave

Thank you, Savvy. I really appreciate you taking the time to review my poems, and I am SO happy you like them. I took your advice and changed the punctuation ...

This sounds really interesting, Star. I think you should definitely continue it. It's also really important to get out of your comfort zone and write differently than normal to mature ...

Thanks! I'll be sure to read it when it's ready!

I agree with you on "world" and "weight". I think I must have thrown them in there on my first draft for lack of better words and then didn't ever ...

Swiftfur, Maybe I'm interpreting this wrong, but it sounds like you are writing about writer's block. :) I loved the play on words throughout the entire piece and the final ...

P.S. Eagerly awaiting Chapter 2!!!

Thank you so much, Savvy! I will definitely consider your suggestions.

:) I really enjoyed this. Sometimes it's good to just have fun and write whatever nonsense pops into our heads.

I totally get this! People are always telling me to "speak English" when I use a word "too big."

Yeah, sometimes short stories are the best format for things like this. Authors know best! :)

This is amazing, Authorian! I think you should try it as a longer story- maybe a novel or a novella. There's so much story here just waiting to be uncovered. ...

This is my first review, so, yeah. Don't take anything I say super seriously. I loved this piece! It felt marginally too quick- if you could slow it down and ...