JoytheBrave

Oh my goodness! I love the changes! Wonderful job, Scribbles.

This is brutally honest. It almost hurts to read about the truth in our lives. I've always been driven mad by the circle of "make money so my kids can ...

For now I've removed the prologue to make some changes. If you have any ideas let me know. Once again, thank you for the review.

Alternate history would work, but I want the dialogue to be more modern. If I just decided to set it during actual medieval times could I still keep the dialogue ...

Hi! Can the author join in the debate? Probably the main reason I put this idea out here was so people could help me make it more realistic. So thanks ...

I see what you're saying. When I began writing this I knew there would be some logic problems to work out. Thanks for the review.

Hey. I know its been a while but a found a website on the hanged vs. hung issue. I thought you might want to check it out.

Hey Salty, This is a very imaginative poem. You did very well with your imagery, and I liked how you switched between continents. The rhyming seemed forced and not very ...

Thanks so much for the honest review, Widdershins! When I wrote this poem I did kind of stretch to get it to rhyme. I didn't know if it would sound ...

You are SO welcome. I should be thanking you for letting me read this. You HAVE to let me know when you publish the first chapter.

Hey friend, This piece of yours= AMAZING! I loved it. Just wanted to let you know. +1 like.

Ah. That's a bummer. :) Next time, right?

If you want to you can post it again, but as a review this time. I wouldn't care. :)

Thanks so much for the comments.

A few of the lines are referring to dancing. I'll work to make that more apparent.