Jonathan

Oy, Just remember that this has nothing to do with real life.

YES well I must say my spelling has never been top notch so...And please no offense but is it any of your business.

Wezl Dodnt feeel dad I nexer mearned to spellll willle

Sorry I thought it was published I never could have noticed that it was not though.

I love this one. :)

Well I was told this but if you tuch a baby deer and the mother smells it then ether the mother will leave the baby or kill it. Therefore Life ...

Thank-you Alias. :D

Yeah I know my dialog is in the durt but I have tried a lot to fix it and it is not really working. Well I will try to fix ...

But I want it to flow like a river.

thank-you

Thank-you very much. :D

Yeah well I had no real idea in mined. :P

Really no offense here my friend but if you want it to count you have to try a little harder to help not doing it for yourself. All I got ...

My point was things are often not what they seem to be. But thanks for the review. :D

I wish I could kill myself a hundred times no a billion times. I will never forgive myself. :( I did not review it while it was in the green ...