Jonathan

I dont exactly see how a tail could give you the ability to disappear. I also think that it needs to be capsule not capsle. They already new where i ...

Mush to big.

I must have been mistaken a few times sorry.:(.

I will try.

(I do things that are not really me) not (that isn't really me) maybe. Thanks I can feel like what you do.:).

I think you might need to hit enter more often. Why would you be scared of some rabble. Your instead of you in you hopeless might be better. O man ...

(There way to the sea) not (there were to the sea) What is smog. It is beautiful poem.

I think the reason no one has reviewed it is because its so big but if you cut it in half maybe someone will red it but keep it up ...

Wow this is hug. I will read it.

Also i agree with Therealme.

Nice its a little bit hard to understand but interesting.

Months old might not be the best words to yews, maybe a month old would do. Which birthday did Seth disappear on might need to be a little specific here. ...

You are very welcome.

Maybe you could call it Life and Death or something. It sounds rather unusual but it rimes nicely. I am sure that I couldn't rime anything this well. But I ...

Thank-you for the encouragement...:)