Jon

I agree Heather, I'll work on it. Thankyou for doing it! I appreciate it. I'll touch it up when I have some time. :D ---Jon--- :D

Thankyou so much Vox Nihli! You weren't annoying at all! :lol: I appreciate you taking the time to help me out with your comments. This poem was meant to say ...

Emily for the win!

Thankyou guys so much! You all made my day! The blue mountain is actually a big tidal wave. :wink: Thankyou guys! ---Jon--- :D

Thankyou everyone! I agree that it needs something, I think I'll add more to it? Thankyou! ---Jon--- :D

Thanks June and Slade!

you made my day too! I do agree with the scenery and that it needs to be more. Thank you so much!

Thanks june! ---Jon--- :D

Thanks andy, This was a flashback so it didnt make sense if you haven't read chps. 1-9. :wink: Madeline didn't leave! Ruby did.

Thanks June! I will definitely take the advice about what Ruby packed! Thank you so much! ---Jon--- :D

Thanks Dark angel!

Thankyou rascalover! You made my day too! ---Jon---

This has 42 stars, a record i must say. ---Jon--- :D

Thankyou kyte! yes, the rhyme is supposed to be that way. I will try and rephrase the whole breeze/wind thing! Thankyou ---Jon--- :D

:smt010 that was really harsh! I don't like how you changed it, it doesn't sound right if you read it. sorry. Thanks for the review! ---Jon--- I mean you changed ...