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Haha, yes, Moaning Myrtle! Lol And thanks, Guys!

Red heads are said to be more seductive, I've heard. xD Ah well, lol.

Lol, thanks Ross! I'll dabble with it some; see what I can do. Thanks!

Haha, thanks, Knightly! I do see what you mean; I'll think about taking it out. ^_^ but then, as you said, it makes it seem likes she's saying all beautiful ...

Hey, thanks, you guys! I'm glad you liked it. The speaker is indeed a mother to her child. ^_^ Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it! -Jon

Thanks, guys! I'm going to try and tweak it a little without changing the idea, as you seem to like it. Thanks, Jon :D

Thank you Bond and Trident! Trident -- I get what you mean about evoking a more violent action from the narrator to get something return. (Thank you for that Idea!) ...

Thanks. It was supposed to be "Ranty". My teacher said, "This is supposed to be a sonnet complaining about something in life." So was rant-ish. (But that's what I was ...

Thanks. I wrote it for class. (I didn't want to put the words "Gay-Discrimination" in it, as it was read out loud.) But, I see what you mean. I thought ...

Wow, Tiff! That is all I can say. That was a very refreshing read, it really was. I got chills as I read the last word...fantastic. *Gold Star* Now, write ...

She's on vacation and misses home a bit. So I thought I'd post this. ^_^

Thank you June and Kylan! Kylan -- You're 100% right. I've only ever read older poets, and, it has influenced my poetry. I'll definitely read some newer ones. (It'll be ...

Thanks April and June! June -- • The first question that came to mind when I read this was "How old is Orilie?" In the prolouge it says she's 16. ...

Thank you, Galerius. :shock: I can't believe I spelled "Millenia" wrong! Whoops. (By the way, I know how to spell "Millenia" XD) Thanks for the review, I think I'm going ...