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Re: Lucifer
This is fan-freaking-tastic. The archaic language is perfectly suited to this subject matter. The meter makes the piece sound like a fairy story ( it is! ) and that only ...
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Re: Prisoner to the stagger
Oh this is fun. This is a poem that likes to break the fourth wall ( window? ) In fact, i'm not even sure if the fourth wall was built ...
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Re: Manipulation
This is dark. Heavy imagery and subject matter. Your use of enjambment is to really great affect here. It sets up tension perfectly and has me going in all sorts ...
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Re: Heaven's Angel, Hell's Rebel.
This is lovely :3. I know you have heard, but you've got a really effective set of images here and you use them to the fullest. The old angel+fallen angel/opposites ...
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Re: Drug called Ignoring
This is pretty hard to argue with. This concept is ( as everyone says ) something we have all been through. When someone who used to be our life now ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Struggling Hard to Experience
This is fun. I love the practice of Blackout poetry. I hope you enjoyed making it. Did you select words while thinking about any particular topic or did you just ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: October
This is interesting. I haven't read any of your other work, so I may not be aware of over-arching subject matter, but this one poses a lot of questions for ...
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Re: Life Poem
This is a heavy one. You are dealing with some deep issues here and I say, keep going with it! Good on you for being able to speak about it. ...
Nov 27, 2014
