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Wow, this piece is so atmospheric! I love the image of that white smoke whisping out, the rain, the porch- all so interesting and tone-conveying. It seems like the main ...

Oh wow! When I read that the boy's name was Peter and read his accented speech, I started to get those Peter Pan vibes. I like the direction that you ...

Having watched Forensic Files, I think that it is very interesting that the police did not investigate. Perhaps if this was set back in an earlier time period, they would ...

Quick review! c: Are you really only twelve? This was exceptional for someone your age, if you are. I really love the repeated structure patterns throughout this poem. It keeps ...

Just a quick little review. c: This was so good. I absolutely love your word choice, as well as the feeling that this invokes. It's a great spoken word poem. ...

I like your imagery here ^^ Highly effective for your purpose, while not being too blunt. However, I feel like your flow could be a bit better. You could try ...

Interesting concept. You executed it pretty well, although I feel like you could have included more about the main character. Little quirks that she has and such. What is her ...

Hi! Another review from me ;b So, I like this one a lot. The flow is better than in the other one I read, although the pattern is the same. ...

Hi! Just a quick little review. ^^ So, I like the imagery that you used here, even if I don't really know the context. Would you enlighten me? I like ...

Interesting poem. I like how you used personification to describe the bamboo, using a first person point of view. However, I think it would have been more powerful if you ...

This is beautiful. A truly profound piece. I feel like people change who they are in many situations, when making friends, being in temporary relationships, and especially on the internet. ...

I love this. It feels resonant to me, although I'm not yet in the stage where I can let things go. This poem flows rather smoothly, although some spots could ...

A deep, introspective piece on what it means to pursue something and wonder why one is even doing it in the first place. The day in, day out routine of ...

This made me smile. I love how you described the character's interactions, with subtle references to let the readers know that this is based in a Star Wars universe. I ...

First off: I love this. It has a gentle rhythm throughout that has a consistent beat to it. I especially like the idea that hope can be a dangerous feeling, ...