JimmyTheMighty

This is really gorgeous! I love the short, sweet lines - some other dramatic poetry seems to make everything so long and confused, wheras this is very fresh, and also ...

Ooh, I really liked this! It feels almost like a haiku, if you get what I mean, especially the beginning, and I really enjoyed it for that. It's obviously simple, ...

I felt that some parts of it were very lyrical, but others were too jolty - they didn't flow enough: I liked the first stanza, it was interesting, fairly basic, ...

Wonderful! I'm a New Zealander, so 9.11 hasn't really affected me in the awful way it has for America, but this really made me feel the pain this has caused ...

That's gorgeous, just gorgeous! I apologise, when I saw what you said about it being about starting high school I wasn't impressed - but within the first stanza I was ...

Well shadowhunter, you know how much I like science! I like how fast this is - it's cute and quick, and just generally fun - I enjoyed reading it. I ...

This is stunning - absolutely stunning You have amazing skill, even though you use no rhyme, it's very flowing, almost lyrical - and the way you wrote it felt like ...

I love this. I truly love this! As I don't really have any complaints, let me tell you how I liked it, and why. The title: Going down the list ...

I love the repetition - the last line is what really captured me and made me want to read it again. I like the simplicity - it's not too crowded ...

Wow. Despite what some other reviewers have said, I think this is wonderful. Just the quality of your descriptive language is exquisite! I couldn't skip a word, I was so ...

Meh my first review just disapeared :( Oh well, i'll do my best! I absolutely adore the descriptive language used in this piece! Segments like echoing in my ears and ...

very beautiful. I love the way you tell the story like that of a legend - as if you were far away but genuinly cared about the characters. However the ...

Very poignant, and quite beautiful. Not being a big fan of fantasy or science fiction it was great to see a work like this. Your use of adjectives was superb, ...

Wow! This was an amazing read! The writing was incredibly smooth, if you know what I mean. There was no disruption anywhere and the story carried on very well which ...

This is a truly beautiful piece of writing, the repetition of 111 times is what made it for me. In a way it is sad and happy which is very ...