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Okay then, your the first to mention that. Thanks though for the comment, tis always appreciated.

Um yeah. Okay, the one thing that bugged me was the prayer thing. Its unrealistic because it wouldnt happen the way you described it. They'd have to purify themselves before ...

Very descriptively written. I quite liked it. Although I have no idea how to tell you to improve it. Still it was very good, in my opinion at least.

Hehe. Oh well, the girl was as random as the story. Lol, thanks for the comments and praise ppl.

This is good, infact it's very good if considered as a fairytale, which is the way it comes off. A continued simplistic approach is nice, I think, and can be ...

Yes, thanks people. I fixed up that little "too quickly" thing earlier. But again, Cheers.

Thanks people. LOl, yes I can call bush a demon and fear not Im already in hiding.

This is the next part, enjoy. ******* As the bus took him to some unknown destination, he waited. He would be contacted soon; he merely had to wait patiently. The ...

It didnt stand out, in fact it seemed rather ordinary, as if you didnt put the energy into it.

Hey, this is quite good. If Im not wrong, then the title refers to the Valkeryi(sp?), and IO loved the ancient, mythical feeling of these words. Nicely done.

Cool. Thats what this was. One question: Is this about you? Or is this something you wrote on the spur of the moment? Okay so thats more then one question, ...

Cool. Thanks for the comments...god I sound like a broken record. From now on it mus be assumed that I appreciate comments, which I do. Phoenix, some good tips given ...

I'll take it then, that you like this newer version, eh Torpy. Im not sure when I will post/write the next part, but it shouldnt be too long from now.

Yeah, the 'M' was meant to be capitalized. Thanks for your comments Doe and others. I personally think there isnt enough to it. As if he should have done more, ...

Oh dear. I was riveted the whole way through this epic masterpiece. Truly visionary work. Bravo.