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Nice little poem Snoinkles, I quite like it. I didn't get the capitalization of warmth and sunlight; that threw me off a little. There seems to no point to it. ...

Wow. Rave review! Woo! Thanks a lot Rose, the idea of the Notweb and indeed the whole story comes from a picture in the Fantasy Fools usergroup. I hadn't thought ...

Thanks Myth for those suggestions, they were good. Hmm, I didn't really want to say how Pape and Naela died, just implied really. But I changed that; do you think ...

Hahaha, thanks lexy. Tis appreciated.

oooooo I loved this. It was ... wow. Awesome. Excellent imagery, and everything seemed to flow well, it was just great. I didn't like the last line though, threw me ...

OMG lol, those thoughts are meant to be in italics, hahaha, thanks for the crit adam. Oh and that poem was what the story had to be based on for ...

I am such a goner, lol. My story ... is ... uh, nowhere near as good to say the least. I don't think the original idea even came through, in ...

*has been waiting for far too long* *shakes fist angrily* Hurry up, damn you! I hvae no patience, gaaaaarhh I just want to bite someone in the face! But ... ...

I'll agree with Snoinkles on that and with the He thing, I'm saying you should do that.

Thanks, changes implemented.

Really? Never heard the RPG thing before, but I'll take that into consideration and indeed all of the above suggestions. Thanks a million. Hahaha, always wanted to say that.

Hahaha, thats all well and good. There were 5, last time I checked but suggestion noted. Chapter 1 coming soon; I plan for it to start before the prologue, in ...

Woo!! Awesome crit jack thanks, as I explained, the 'juts' thing is a typo, meant to be 'just'. Hehe, I'll fix that up, very very helpful crit so thank you ...

Why thank you. This particular scene may be reshuffled later, in the sense that it may no longer be the prologue, lol. I dont know yet. But yes, Chapter 1 ...

Well written, but I agree with Kat. Too short. And as to the quote she put up, I think there should be a space after the ellipse. I could be ...