Jevan13

It is always thumbs up when there is the fact that your readers can relate to this persona. To be longing for love and finding it out of your reach ...

Wow...just wow. You know, I don't get how people express themselves so well in short pieces...I can't. This piece was beautiful and insightful. I actually find myself relating to the ...

This is an intriguing poem. It tells me of the persona's love of reading yet wastes no time with fancy wording. I definitely love the way the poem is structured, ...

It is always much appreciated when someone chooses not to do a full rhyming poem. It shows that you are taking initiative and wasted no timed on trying to come ...

Your poem was like ambrosia from the gods, appeasing, beautiful, powerful yet not all can take it in. Your eloquence is amazing, so much so that this seems like a ...

Lol. I just love this chicken already. I like the fact that this is a short poem. You know why? Because believe it or not it is harder to write ...

This was absolutely beautiful. The poem pulsated with emotional energy, feeding itself into my mind and compelling me to relate to it. "I run alongside their joyful voices, flying through ...

The description of the heat at the start is different from what I've seen this far. When you get to lungs never seeming full, and the iced tea seeping straight ...