Jetpack

Hey, second review. Okay, nitpicks. Chemicals. I wrinkled my nose. The disgusting odor of chemicals Not sure about the repetition, it doesn't quite do it for me. Eww. This, too, ...

Hey, Audy. I just saw your request, but I was going to review this anyways, so it all works out rather well. I haven't read the other reviews, so apologies ...

Okay, I'll give you nitpicks, since if this is due tomorrow you probably aren't going to have time to rewrite major parts of it. Quick review, then. she relishes in ...

Hello again! Thanks for the reminder PM. I'll get straight down to it, but this is once again, well written. But the pinging on the door stopped. I'm not sure ...

Hi again. This is the second part of your review, as requested, but I'll have to warn you that quite a lot of this was totally over my head - ...

Here as requested, but I notice this is book two? Clearly I haven't read book one, but I'll try my best with this. I didn't read the backstory, because I ...

Hey, Auteur. You seem pretty keen to get reviews, so I think I'll give you one. I'll nitpick a bit, because it's obviously quite short. Like a broken clock my ...

Hey there! Glad to see you've started posting your work. It's a lot less terrifying the second time, believe me. I'm quite a picky reviewer, though - don't take it ...

Hi again! I know this has been up for a while, but I've not been reviewing much recently and so I've only just spotted it. I'll give you a general ...

This is my first review in a few days, so I'm a little off the pace here. Okay, I don't like the prologue. Once I got onto the main body ...

Miss Bronte must be turning in her grave. Quite. xD Anyway, I have a couple of ideas about reading it. I struggled, and as a result I couldn't remember any ...

Hey, Gretchen! Welcome to YWS. I'm Jetpack, but you can call me Jet if you want. No need to be nervous about posting your work. Everyone on this site is ...

Hi, Jojo! It's me again. I spotted this little piece and figured I'd give you another review. First off, the nitpicks. A bright light stared back. But not a blinding ...

I have to disagree with Merlin. I actually really enjoyed this, even though I had to wonder a bit about what was going on. The ideas are really fresh and ...

Hi, KJ. I'm here as promised. I can't quite remember how I reviewed your last piece, but I think this one would benefit more from a general summary of my ...