Jennya

Hello, I see from your small amount of reviews that you are probably a newbie (forgive me if I'm wrong) so welcome to YWS. I general this is a really ...

Hello, thanks for the review, will take your advice advice to hand. I will try to review differently this time, just experimenting. First/ Second Paragraph. I think the first couple ...

I hate it when work doesn't get marked or even worse when it get marked and you get no feedback.Since this is in old English it will be hard to ...

Hello here to review your work. I will review as I read, I find it easily that way. I will put my comments into your novel. But first thing is ...

Nice poem, Ive never seen one written on this topic so you defiantly get kudos for originality. Not only have you written about a original topic but done it quite ...

Hello, The other reviews are so long its crazy, I bow down to their awesomeness. A dark figure ghosted across the roof of one building and leapt for the next ...

Hello, This is a nice way to start a story. Quite a nice intro goes well with the prologue. Although this is a little to short for an actual chapter ...

Hello! I have come to review! Personally, just by looking at this I can see that it might fit better in the poetry section. This is defiantly not a short ...

Hey, I have come to review. I have read parts of the other reviews and they are very good. I used to love prologues but now I like the reader ...

Nice, I agree with the other viewer it did feel like JK. Like you fan fiction is very new to me but since Harry Potter is coming to an end ...

Nice! I really liked your synopsis, It really drew me in. I really loved the relationship dynamic between the brother and sister. I could actually see them arguing like that. ...

Hey, I like the plot! but it sounds a little to much like a romantic comedy movie I watched once. It fairly old came out at least six years ago. ...

Nice, I agree with the other reviews the simplicity and the meaning of this poem are quite neat. You have described quite nicely the topic. Your poem is very relate-able ...

I know how you feel. I too need flirting lessons, but then again I just don't flirt, not with anyone. Nice little story, very brave of you to post something ...

The first thing I noticed about this was it's length. It is really long, maybe next time separate chapters into parts for easy reading. In the description of the novel, ...