Jennafina

You say the currant word of the week in here! I like your poem, it seems philosophical. This is my favorite line: We love propaganda. Is it possible to follow ...

Age doesn't matter! Well, it shouldn't. I'm not going easy on you just because you're 7, lol. :) I sat in the corner of my classroom. I was like every ...

I like the title 'I Can Hear Voices'. It could be a bit misleading, though, it sort of hints at skitzofrania(sp). 'Hide and Go Seek: The Child' seems a little ...

Wow, thats interesting! I can't wait to see the rest! :) “Night” grunted her father as he passed her room to get to his. “Night dad” she said weekly back ...

Awww! :) I like how you gradually progress from little kid games to the present, but always with your friend. 'And have blond and green hair and twenty-three piercings' is ...

Wow, that was depressing, but sweet too, somehow. I liked how the reader was inside the main charecter's head. Maybe you could put what he is thinking in italics though, ...

Please right more! I'm really interested to hear the whole story. This is like a preview- it lets you know that its going to be good, but doesn't really give ...

Wow, that was sad, and interesting. Very opinionated, lol.

That is GREAT!!! Short, cute little humorous story. Its really interesting, and I like how you alternate between suspenceful and funny. I also like the slighty different culture, it makes ...

The word Gelid really puts an image. I like how you've made them sound so natural- not forced at all. Being in Alaska, the first one is automaticly my favorite. ...

Hmmm.. That was certanly interesting! :) Somehow, even though the idea started the poem, the frogs thing doesn't quite fit. It feels like you're doing it only to match your ...

Wow! I love it! The rhymes... Ooh, the rhymes! I'd watch them too, but my back is to the window in math, the only class I don't pay atention in... ...

I like it! Its short, but sweet in a depressing sort of way. Hmm.. That doesn't make sense, does it. I can feel the motion of the bus. The only ...

*cough* Nice... ;) jk, Thats awesome. My mom looked over my shouldure while I was reading this. She didn't have her glasses so she could only read the parts in ...

Wow, I love the flow on this. Like RiverGirl says, it feels really natural. I like how the word serendipity ties it all together. A happy accident is what it ...