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Re: Back at Bag End - How it Should Have Gone
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, I have to be honest, I was very disappointed with this piece. I mean, after reading through it, and reading through the other ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: Vocabulary Test Stories
Hi, J.C. here for a review! These stories were awesome! Extremely funny and witty. And I love the fact that you wrote them for the vocabulary. With that, Bob elegantly ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Unwind
Hi J.C. here for a review! Well, as you've obviously stated, this is based off of another person's book, so I won't credit you with the ideas and such, so ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Tides--- Chapter 2, White Walls, and 3, Memories
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, I really, really liked these pieces. Your writing style is very modern and minimalist. It would take too long to explain ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 3
I just read through my review, and I realized that I didn't point out a lot of good things. I don't want you to think that I found nothing good ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 3
Hi, J.C. here for a review! So, first thing I noticed is the length. The chapter length isn't bad, but because I'm reading this on a screen and can't lay ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, I think the title of this poem is the best part. Seriously, though, if everyone stopped and thought about it, and ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: A Pathetic Poem
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Before I begin, I will be honest, this poem did not intrigue me very much. This is not to say that it is not ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: "Let it Load"
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Lol, this was awesome. Honestly, this, to me, is the pinnacle of humorous poetry. I've never cared much for works that fit into the ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, I am surprised this has not gotten a lot more likes and reviews and such. It's a very well written piece. ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Sidney's Children Meets Youtube~ Prologue (Part 1)
Hi, J.C. here for a review, as requested! This will be an honest review, so please don't take anything harshly, even if it seems like a bash your story here ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: As She Passed
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, this poem was very sweet, and I have one heck of a sweet tooth when it comes to writing, and chocolate. ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: The Seventh Kit (a Narnia fanfic) - Chapter 2, The New Arrival
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Mr Tumnus let his eyes amble over the soft raised dome in the ground. The raised hemisphere of glass was barely noticeable if you ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Six
Hi, J.C. here for a review! My first impressions were mostly good. The story is different, and the names and nouns are interesting, though there isn't much insight into the ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Sameness
Hi, J.C. here for a review! First off, I just read probably one of the best poems written on this site, in my opinion, so I'll try to do this ...
May 25, 2014
