Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language and violence.
Chapter 2 – White Walls
The living space that Daniel and the girl inhabited would be deemed genius by all men on Earth. If it was a bit more visible. Imagine a campfire, that wobbly haze distorting the space around the smoke. Or the heat waves rising off of the pavement on a hot summer's day. Those are the type of abnormalities that thickly cloaked the place Daniel called home. If one were to look, if there were a soul aside from the two of them to look, they would see a a boy of decent height carrying something. A girl, maybe? And then one would watch as the two melted into thin air. Simply disappearing, leaving ripples in their wake. Ripples. In the air. How ridiculous. Yet they were there. Impossible, but most certainly real.
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Daniel laid her down gently, quietly watching her sink down into the fluff of the mattress. Her eyes were closed, but he knew she wasn't asleep. He crossed the room, walking through the pure, white wall without so much as a backwards glance. In watching this one would notice a second abnormality in this strange place. Where were the doors? The boy walked through a wall. Leaving the same small, distorting ripples for only seconds after the exit was made. Odd and most certainly impossible. Nevertheless, it occurred.
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Daniel often pondered the thought of painting this place. It was just so white. White tile floors, white textured ceilings, and then the white walls. White walls everywhere. And no doors. It had taken him a good while to figure out the wall plan. The places where the reality of the wall wasn't quite thick enough, and allowed him to pass through. Those were the doors of this house.
Daniel pulled a chair up to the kitchen table and sat, realizing how stupid the idea was. Where around here was he supposed to get paint? He chuckled. Where did these thoughts come from? How could he want to paint something with no memory of touching a brush? He pushed the thoughts away. He stood, deciding that the he owed the ocean an individual visit. Maybe the tides would tell him something today.
His mind carried him along a different path from that which he was physically traveling. He found his mind wandering until the waves lapped at his feet. It was odd. He had noticed that his two focus points were the tides and the girl. They occupied his thoughts when he was away from them, and filled his senses when they were near. He could hear the waves even when he was miles away. Daniel stepped into the shallows, thanking whatever supreme being there was for the calm waters today. Further and further he waded in, loving the temperature difference between his upper and lower body and the sand beneath his feet. With the sea around mid-torso, he dove.
Water rushed around him, pushing bubbles back to the surface, before fully submerging Daniel. He sank down to the sand, the water helping him gently to the ocean floor. Daniel held no breath. Nor did he have any distinguishing characteristics of any marine species. Not even a memory of obtaining such a skill. Regardless, Daniel put his odd talent to good use.
The currents were being friendly today, leaving the water practically clear, although it made no difference to Daniel. He could see either way, as though his sight line repelled the murk. He began to swim, quickly passing the continental shelf and entering the reef. The colors of the coral jumped out at him while he "fishwatched", his own personal term. Bird watching, Fish watching, where is the difference? There was no one to tell Daniel otherwise. He headed on, looking for just the right shade of that coral. She always loved the coral, but scolded him for taking it. It was living, she would say, and then, "What did it ever do to you?" But the sparkle in her eyes told him she thought it was beautiful.
Pleasant thought, but that wasn't why Daniel was searching. He rose higher, scanning. In a reef so massive, the spot was easy to miss. And...there. A flash of silver. He twisted, building momentum and shooting through the sea towards his target. Weaving through the sharp edges of rock and reef was one skill Daniel had developed himself. His first visit had resulted in multiple scratches, and a gash just under the base of his left ear that gave him a noticeable scar. Now, it was effortless. He analyzed the turns seconds before they came and adjusted accordingly.
In no time at all he was there, tugging aside a dazzlingly electric blue piece of coral. A familiar black hole opened up in the rock before him, inviting him into its depths. Then the flash, as the last of the Silverfish vanished into the darkness. He followed the pull of the tides, and disappeared after them.
Chapter 3 -- Memories
The girl opened her eyes slowly and absorbed her surroundings as reassurance to her location. It often took a minute after waking up for the memories she had gained to resurface.
This was the one and only reason she disliked sleep. It temporarily turned her into what some would describe as a blank slate. Those memories were elusive sometimes. They loved the release they were given when she drifted out of consciousness, and resisted being drawn back into the organized confines of her head.
The girl shuffled sleepily over to the small white desk in the corner of the room, and opened the second to last drawer. She pulled a sheet of copy paper from the middle of a stack, seeing as the top sheet had a bent corner. Daniel always teased her at the expense of those perfectionist problems. She picked up a ballpoint pen that had probably never been touched, and thought about what she would write. He was probably lounging in the basement. She hated it down there, and had resolved never to descend those stairs again after her first visit. It stank, of some smell she couldn't quite identify but that Daniel seemed completely immune to.
Danny,
I'm taking a walk down to the beach. I'll be back before noon. Just need some time to think. See you soon.
-Alaina
She smiled as she printed out her name. Daniel had chosen it, and she had chosen his. Neither of them could remember anything concrete, any specific history. So he had chosen Alaina. He said he liked the way the vowels interacted, and the solidness and consistency of the "a". She had a vague memory of a book with the name Daniel associated with it and had selected the name for the strength she felt that it contained. She could say it naturally, with the feeling that he belonged here, with her.
Alaina dropped the pen with a clatter. She sank to the white carpeted floor, her heartbeat accelerating along with her pulse. She curled up, knees to chest, as she fought. Against what, she didn't know. It was almost as if something was tugging at her essence, sucking her through the fabric of reality forcefully. She could hardly take it, this feeling of losing control. Her thoughts wandered in directions she had no say in, and it was all she could do not to vomit.
This must have been the tenth time, but she still had not told Daniel. She felt awful, but it would worry him. And she was always fine afterwards. The worst part though, what bothered her most, was the spontaneity. No warning, no previous feeling of sickness, nothing. But they never happened when Daniel was near. Simply another sick, twisted reason she desired his presence. She still needed her alone time though.
Thankfully, the attack had passed. She pulled herself up and gripped the edge of the desk with shaking hands. After picking up the note, she made her way carefully to the wall. She brushed the surface with her hand tentatively before she vanished into thin air.
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Hey there Yeup!
I was so shocked when I found out they were both ghosts! It kind of makes sense as well, the way Daniel hinted at it when he picked Alaina up in the previous chapter.
This is seriously an awesome beginning to a story and I can't wait to see where you are going to take this. I read the first chapter before I read this one just so I would know what was going on. And previous reviewers are right, you've created the perfect show of romance in third person and I love it. I already feel like Daniel and Alaina should be together forever. You've got a great writing style, with real talent. I think your specialty is the descriptions though. They demonstrate what you mean perfectly, and beautifully, almost like you've combined poetry into this novel perfectly! I love it! Things that could be difficult to grasp like the ripples can easily be envisioned in my mind now
I do have a few questions that I think would be nice to have answered here as well. I know they have no memory of the past, but there must be memory of their lives as ghosts, as you have mentioned. So how did they even find this house? Was he first awake inside the house and he needed to find a way out, so of course he kept persisting until he found it? Or did he stumble on the house and was interested, so from the outside he kept persisting?
You've hit a little pet peeve of mine, and it has to do with ellipses. The thing is, if you have those three little dots and no space afterwards, then technically you are connecting those two words, and that isn't correct. There needs to be a space after the ellipsis.
Also, I am not quite getting the concept of being a ghost? They can walk through walls, sure, but then how does the things underwater scratch and cut Daniel when he shouldn't be able to feel it? This doesn't make sense. What can and can't they feel? Is it just something they can turn on and off at will? Make sure you explain this and so that we can see limits and what they ghosts can do.
Another thing I am curious to know is how Daniel and Alaina met. Did they just wake up together out of the blue one day, and had to discover they were ghosts themselves? Did they find each other, surprised that the other could see them? It's up to you really, but a little bit of backstory would be nice, and something to look forwards too.
I will go read the next chapter!
Deanie x
Hi, J.C. here for a review!

I must say, I really, really liked these pieces. Your writing style is very modern and minimalist. It would take too long to explain exactly what that means so, just take my word for it
Wow, you explain things so well. I've ready plenty of books with large vocabs that paint great pictures in my mind, but those aren't the books that capture me. It's the ones that step out of the mold and do something wild. I like to read explanations of things that I never would have thought of, and I definitely never would have thought of this.
Just a suggestion I have. In the world of writing I find that so many people forget about Formatting. This is a very important part of writing, though. A lot of writers are tempted to just block their words and sentences together, as you've done here, but it's not so appealing to the eyes.
By formatting your writing in this way, you accomplish several things. The first is that you add length to your story in terms of pages. And that is always, always a good thing. Secondly, you make those one liners and one worders stand out more. You draw attention to them, and you accomplish the hardest thing to do in writing, which is to say more, with less.
I just can not get over these explanations. I love them. They are so surreal and cryptic, yet down yo earth and realistic in the way they mesh. I don't feel like it's being forced, either, and that tells me you come by this gift naturally. I envy you in some ways, and in other ways I'm glad that I have some of those same gifts. Whatever you do, don't stop writing!
Thank you yeupyuep!
Oh my word...Thank you. That means a lot. But, yeah. I just kind of write. I don't plan anything. I just write, because it feels much more natural. I create characters on the spot, and...just...write.
I am horribly lazy with the formatting though. Really lazy. I just don't bother. You are very right, though, and I'll see how I can incorporate that into further writing.
Thank you so much, again! That was amazing to read.