Jashael

I won't agree with number two, 'cause just so people know, there are other forums with custom titles. :) But other than that, this is an amazing article. Good job! ...

Hey there twin! Twin here to do a review. (LOL) This is random. Anyway, you probably have a feeling that I'm a total critic when it comes to lyrics. Guessed ...

Hey, Silent. Here again for a review. Oh, I'm slow. Forgive me...have been really busy. Okay, to avoid confusion, nitpicks are pink, suggestions are blue. =) Nitpicks should be considered; ...

Hi, Skinso. I dropped by for a very quick review. I'll just point out a few nitpicks, and suggestions. =) I just remembered standing in the field, staring and t ...

Hey, Skinso, as promised back in your page, I’m reviewing your story. =) I don’t know though if you’ve changed anything since the time I’ve saved this on my lappie-toppie, ...

Hi, Noob! (No pun intended.) I'm here at last to review. First, I'd like to apologize for my slow response. I just figured out that I do actually have a ...

Hello, Angela! Jash here as requested. =) I will divide my review into two parts as it will be easier for me, is that okay? This first post will contain ...

All I have to say is that the second stanza should be seriously squeezed to keep the flow. Anyway, the rhythm and rhyming were done well, I suppose. And there's ...

Hey Silent, as requested, I'm reviewing your poem and picking the one which is best for me. The others I have reviewed, so I don't think I'd be reviewing much. ...

Hey there! I'm Jash and here as requested! NITPICKS in pink. He didn't even have to look to know what it was : blood . Umm...that was it. LOL Okay, ...

Hello there! Jash here for a random, short review. I have nothing to nitpick here, i.e. typos and such, but I do have a wee problem with the structure. I ...

Hey Cupicake, so I think that this was a bit short. And by that, I didn't mean the length but the poem's theme itself. It was like you didn't get ...

Hey there, Per! Jash here as requested. NITPICKS and COMMENTS will be in pink font. I met you first in a Christmas ornament. It was a peacock, of all non-Christmasy ...

Hey, Robster! I'm Jashy and I'm here to review as requested. =) Wow...this will be the first time I'll review a play (no one requests from me). I've read a ...

Hey, Hero! Congrats on the feature! Just stopped by for a review. =) What I see in this poem is the same little distraction with the commas. Entering (¶) already ...