Jashael

Hey, Unc. How you doin'? :) Some nitpicks... COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Aimee better be back there because I'm not wasting my time looking ...

Hi, Tiggie! Once again, I've had the chance to review you. :) Though you know I couldn't tear this apart--grammatically; but I'll give my best to give out a shot ...

Hi, Twin. I'm so slow. Anyyyy, I'm here. :) I'm listening now on youtube. :) Nice one here, bro! O_o With some tweaks this can end up on radios. :) ...

Hey, ZLYF. Thanks for the request by the way! =) yay! You're next. Here comes first, of course, the nitpicks: I was a twenty-three - year - old. Here, a ...

Umm...Skinso, I'm so sorry that I'd forgotten about posting this. :| Oh well... I hope this old review is still useful for you. *sigh* My fault. Sarreh... :( 12-30-10 17:09 ...

So, I'm actually impressed with this one, Twin! Only one line bothered me: I know there is love, and not just lots of hate . I just feel it was ...

So I took the guts to review this (LOL), when I knew that you're an awesome writer. Anyway, since I owe you a review (after failing and being late with ...

Hey Emziiiiiieeee! I thank you for the request. Here comes my short review: NITPICKS FIRST: Here is how I'd edit this: Can't think, Can't flinch, Can't move, Not an inch. ...

Hey there Rain, finally here to post my opinions on what you should pass. This is the last stage of my quest. XD After reviewing each, I'm finally here. LOL ...

NITPICKS: outnumbered Now, just like in the previous poem I've reviewed, which was also yours, I've seen this unnecessary spaces. I don't know if these are intentional, but let me ...

NITPICKS: I think these should be: everything goodbye whenever Just tell me if these are intentional. Oh, this is such a lovely poem. It was very touching, my friend. Nicely ...

Oh, I'M SO SORRY. I've written this draft like, weeks ago, and I forgot to post it. Awww...I hope I can still help even if this was requested and written ...

Hey there Silent, as part of the quest that you have given me, I'm here. I know you already told me not to review everything if I don't have the ...

Oh I love this. Funny. Full of feeling. Universal theme. Anyway here at YWS would certainly relate to this. HAHAHAHA... Epic, Mom. Dearly epic. XD Pass it for the journal. ...

So I've got a bunch of review requests, but I stumbled upon this and was hooked by the cover, so now, I'll give a short review. XD After not posting ...