Jas

Oh Mah Goshness. 14 reviews in less than 24 hours? You people are incredible! I've gotten a lot of help so far so I'm going to edit but if anyone ...

Hey, No, I don't think you understand. I don't mean I don't like first-person. I mean, sentences like 'How I wanted to see my little sister again!' irritate me because ...

Thanks for the reviews!

@MandaPanda: Actually, from what Wikipedia and Amazon tells me, Shiver is about wolves. I'm not sure how a random 200 word story that never mentions wolves or even dogs is ...

xD I think that was the point, Tommy. No point. Thanks for the review! :D

I love this entire thing.

I'm totes not bumping this to get more reviews...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone!

I'm pretty sure that Snoink is going to lock this now. xD

To Misstoria who said 'Just because we have a black president, doesn't mean we like him': Hon, speak for yourself. He wouldn't have won the vote if he wasn't liked. ...

Hey, Sixty-two likes. Sixty-one reviews. Holy crap. That's the most likes I've EVER seen a piece get. Woah. You totally deserve it though, this story was brilliant. ~Jas

Oh and the 'everything and nothing' was done purposely.

Thanks Horus! Yeah, I have to fiddle with the rhythm a bit. :)

Hey, So I really liked this. At times, it was a bit rushed and the dialogue was awkward occasionally, but overall this was really great. You have great imagery and ...

xDDDD I know this sucks, I wrote it like two years ago as a fresh and young little YWSer, new to poetry, story-writitng and poetry in general. XDD It's funny ...