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Ugh worse books ever: Across Five Aprils-SNORE, I used this to help me go to sleep on nights where I was hyped up on Monster and Red Bull Jacob have ...

Aww that was so cute! Grammar was great and well I have nothing really to say about this. It was a cute little story about cute little love birds and ...

Aww your too hard on yourself First of all Welcome to YWS, I see your a new member! Second...erm here's the review thingamabober This gave me the mental image of ...

Hey! It's erm ME! The format of the poem is very original. Like Vanadis Ive never seen it before unless you consider Shakespeare poetry which I don't. I consider it ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA!! I love this!! It's really funny to me. I dunno maybe I'm insane....anyway good punctuations (I'm pretty sure I spelled that wrong) from my POV. I don't think you ...

erm...don't haiku's have 4 lines.....I really don't know what to say to this....erm....I'm going to be going now *walks slowly backrounds...then RUNS!* Just kidding, this is weird...don't think you'll

You make it seem like it was horrible! This was really good! I noticed you changed the spelling of her name about 2/3 of the story from Kenya to Kenyah ...

This was a nice poem and I honestly loved the title. What I didn't like were the last two lines. They weren't the big finale I hoped for, but other ...

Isn't there a song by Boys Like Girls and Taylor Swift with this [i] exact name?? [i/] I'm listening to it right now... This erringly reminded me of Twilight with ...

Hey, I think this was good and very original but these kids don't seem thirteen. Maybe you could put something like in Nezeera's POV that she was not 13 but ...

Hey, I love your use of words! I think that you were a bit detailed for a prologue though. Honestly speaking, I truly had not a bit of a clue ...

I completely agree with Zoey,, this reminds me of Love Story by Taylor Swift and Romeo and Juliette and a whole bunch of other stories. It's an EXTREMELY over-played subject...try ...

Hey, I liked this alot but not as much as the last one because the angels/wings thing is a bit overplayed too. I liked the riono-winged thingy because that's oriinality ...

Wait I don't get it the sophomore died? That is really one in my school every died other than the dad of a girl in my class...wow that's pretty tear-jerking....died ...

Wow...I really like this actually. I'm a bit jealous you stole my spot of number two ont the leader boards but nevermind that! Your really good. This however gaveme the ...