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Hey Elly (Yes. That is the way I shall spell your nickname xD), So as you said, this was flash fiction and you probably don't plan on expanding it. Well, ...

Heya, I like this loads (I normally would say a lot but my bipolar history teacher yelled at me today for saying I liked his class a lot. He said ...

Hey, I again liked this but as Snoink said, it got a little boring towards the end. What I don't understand is her age. At first, I thought she was ...

Can this work with TV shows too? Oh well, if it doesn't then you can throw tomatoes at me :) Pretty Little Liars. Ugh. What horrid garbage. In the first ...

First of all, I just noticed your new, so welcome to YWS! :D :D Another cliffy! Goodness, first I thought it was some vampire story but now your giving hints ...

I don't know why but today I'm in a very reviewy mood. :) Probably won't be a good review but let's begin, shall we? K, well, I think that this ...

Ooh La la! Jazzy likey! Lol, this hooked me in so kudos for you, as many prologues these days make me feel like burning the book as they were so ...

I loved this. Like a lot. Wow. I feel like posting this as my Facebook status and being like, OMG I WISH I WAS HALF AS TALENTED AS THE PERSON ...

Finals are coming up in my school and we are mandated to take a plagiarism class. You aren't by US law, allowed to do that, regardless whether you live in ...

Grammar and spelling mistakes: red My comments: bold "I had to do it... I had no other option . " said J essu while walking in circles , examining every ...

Lol, once again I can't really say anything because I'm retty sure everything you did was purposeful. Like leaving out the zombies for the entire chapter, I think you did ...

Maybe I'm crazy but the story itself seems to be a paroady of itself. It has all the cliche bits but rather than correct you for that....I'm not because I ...

Red is things I don't like or grammar mistakes Blue is things I do like The air was thick with mist. It was dark and the sounds of night were ...

Wow. I am speechless. That was one of the most beautiful poems I have EVER read. Wow. I had a feeling it was love ever since you said it has ...

Hey :) I actually read this on my phone when it was in the begining stage thing, when the old mistress was yelling at her and the maidservant lady gave ...