Jas

Hi, I'm so excited that you have something new up. I like it a lot and as with almost everything you write, I feel it could be something really great ...

Hey, I'm not sure what to think of this. This writing is great as usual, though I do have a couple examples where they were less then your usual talent; ...

Hey, I like this but it needs a bit of help. It was night. Very nice first line. Simple but makes me want to continue reading. The next few lines ...

Holaaaa, I definitely did not hate this but you were right, I didn't love it. I liked it, very much, but was it love? no. However, I think that can ...

Hey, First off, welcome to YWS! This is really good. Wow. I was a bit surprised at how much I liked this. You have a very good voice, a smooth ...

Hey, I like this a lot. :] You have a very poetic, flowing way of writing prose and your imagery is just beautiful. First off, I think you need to ...

Hey, Thanks for all the great reviews! Here's one especially for you. Even though I haven't read previous reviews, I hope I'm not redundant and I hope this is some ...

Hola! I haven't read the previous reviews so excuse me if I'm redundant. :] First off, I wouldn't suggest putting the amount of words in the beginning. I've never seen ...

Honestly. ... This hurt my eyes to read. Characters Jezabel (most popular girl)17 Kyle (Jezabels older Brother and one of the most popular guys) 19 Tyler (Jezabels best friend)17 Jace ...

Hey, I really liked this. You have brilliant imagery and the way you use metaphors and such is amazing. It's really short but I feel like if it were any ...

Hi there, I'm Jas and I suppose I'll be reviewing your piece. :] I liked this. I truly did and I feel like you could expand it farther out so ...

Holaa, So this was painfully short to me, but it did it's job. It's really very good even though I had to go back to the previous chapter and re-read ...

Hola, Nitpicky stuff: Roads. His road. His house. Prison. I thought he loved Zach? Why would his house be a prison? bright fog Um, that's kind of an oxymoron. Sitting ...

Hey, Hmm, there isn't much to review here. It had a very concise, professional feel to it and you really wasted no words. "Morgenstern," she said one day. "The world ...

Hey, Because, really, who wouldn’t trust a guy who looked like he’d never done anything wrong except maybe be too perky. I don't know why, but I don't really like ...