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Hey, I liked this but I don't really understand it that well. Maybe I'm just stupid. This seemed (no offense) a little bit like you swallowed poet soup and barfed ...

Hey, Aw, this was cute. I liked it but thought you could add a lot more to it. It was short enough that just by looking down I saw pick-up ...

Hey, So I have to say this was my favorite chapter. It was just amazing. The descriptions were good, the dialogue was believable, I really liked this. :D I didn't ...

Hey, Quite frankly, this wasn't as terrible as you made it out to be. It was intelligent and to me, a teenager who doesn't really enjoy reading essays, I found ...

Hey, Thanks for re-posting the link and sorry for taking so long to do this :) I think that this was good but maybe you overdid it on the descriptions. ...

Hey, I've noticed that most of your storys revolve around a couple of basic themes: eating disorders and cutting. I think that either you should stick with one story because ...

Hey, Aw. It was so cute. I think you should have a little reunion thing between Jackie and Josh. Maybe she comes back for junior year in high school or ...

Well this is extraordinarily short, and the language you've used in writing it is simple, bland, not at all what you want to read in a story most of the ...

Hey, Very nice. This story reminds me sooo much of which is not bad because if you scroll down to Jasmine Bells on that page, you'll see just how much ...

Hey, This was an interesting prologue and I liked it. However, it seemed a bit awkward in the third paragraph because you gave us a little too much info. Prologue's ...

Hey, Now that I've read how Richard is acting and how Tori takes it, I'm not liking it that much. I think that Tori should have stood up to Richard ...

Wow. That was extremely sad. I hope this isn't true..if it is, I'm really sorry. Well, onto the review. There are some parts where your descriptions are prety weak, like ...

I like this. I think that this was a cute little poem but as other reviewers said-go further. You can make this way longer, explain why it isn't blue or ...

Hey, Can I guess what's going to happen? Richard- Killed his brother to get the fortune OR will hit Victoria Victoria- will end up with Oliver Oliver- will end up ...

I think that the first mistake you made was when you told us your interpretation of the poem. If I had just read it normally, I wouldn't have seen the ...