Jared

I like this poem. I really do. I have a few nitpicks to address, but other than that, I want to say I do like this poem. First of all, ...

Review time! Hello! First impression: This was a good story, but it was hampered by small grammar mistakes and a few other issues. Nitpicks: I'll start from the top. I ...

Hello there. This is my first review in months. I'm revising my review structure. Let's see how this goes. First impressions: I read this twice. My initial thought is that ...

Discussion I'll go through bit by bit talking about it. One of the first things I noticed is the spaces, which detracted from my ability to fully absorb your writing. ...

I think that the textures serve to be an interest contrast, and I enjoy overall detail you put in many different aspects of this piece. One of my only nitpicks ...

My main nitpicks are: -Capitalization of i -Apostrophes (she's) versus (shes) Other than that, I liked the use of language to portray emotion and overall I find this to be ...

Hello there. Nitpicks and Changes: Then by a twist of fate, we were assigned to do a school work together. Locked inside four walls with no company but each other, ...

Time for a review again after a brief hiatus in reviewing activity. First, I will start with nitpicks/suggestions: So, first day of school was here. I ran my fingers across ...

Nitpicks and corrections: My name is Terry Nolsten. I have been a slave most of my life. Untill he came, that is. Shin Ak. The savior, the Legend. "I had ...

I have to say, I truly agree with most of this. The one thing that really stuck with me is this: And they forget, or are willingly ignorant or even ...

Why, hello there. Jared here with a review. First up, nitpicks So [,] she shouldn’t really be surprised when she tripped on her own shoe lace and stumbled down the ...

Alright. This is likely my last review on Review Day. I'm going to make it good. First, nitpicks. They seemed to overlook her [,] which was fine. See comma. Mostly ...

This is definitely an interesting poem. I thought you did a very nice job putting a lot of meaning into a very short poem. There are those that exist that ...

Hello there. It's Jared, with another review. First, nitpicks: Before I start on your first paragraph, you should know: It's cluttered. That's the best way to put it. You're putting ...

I'm going to add more on this, actually (I accidentally made a second review, I might as well fill it up properly). I'll start with the fact that this shouldn't ...