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Re: Where the child cries
This is really good. My interpretation is that the people around this child see emotions as something to be fearful of, like a coming storm. So now this child has ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: lakeside
Hi! I think that your poem is amazing. You have amazing descriptions and your tone is something that I've never really seen in a poem (maybe I haven't read enough). ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: All Your Plans are Insignificant
I could really relate to this. The poem was very straightforward, I don't know if that's good or bad, but I guess it depends on what you're trying to evoke ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: unedited
First, I'd like to say I could never leave something unedited(darn perfectionism), but you have inspired me to try. I loved the first two lines, I'm not sure why. Maybe ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Tacenda: Things better left unsaid
This is absolutely beautiful. Amazing imagery, it's very concise and organized. You have an amazing talent and I cant wait to read more of your work. I really like the ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: A Bully Becomes The Bullied
Wow, I love this poem. My favorite line is "Who needs a friend when all they do is misinterpret me?" That's often how I feel of a lot of people ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: C'est la vie
Here is my interpretation. "It tells wonderful tales, Sad beginnings with happy endings, Lies." This line makes me believe that this person is somewhat cynical. They believe that they're are ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Summer's Child
This is very beautiful and sweet. "She never saw a sickly, barren tree, for leaves nor dreams could ever fall in the time that she existed," For me this line ...
May 6, 2015
