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Jaein

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where the child cries

    This is really good. My interpretation is that the people around this child see emotions as something to be fearful of, like a coming storm. So now this child has ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: lakeside

    Hi! I think that your poem is amazing. You have amazing descriptions and your tone is something that I've never really seen in a poem (maybe I haven't read enough). ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: All Your Plans are Insignificant

    I could really relate to this. The poem was very straightforward, I don't know if that's good or bad, but I guess it depends on what you're trying to evoke ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: unedited

    First, I'd like to say I could never leave something unedited(darn perfectionism), but you have inspired me to try. I loved the first two lines, I'm not sure why. Maybe ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Tacenda: Things better left unsaid

    This is absolutely beautiful. Amazing imagery, it's very concise and organized. You have an amazing talent and I cant wait to read more of your work. I really like the ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Bully Becomes The Bullied

    Wow, I love this poem. My favorite line is "Who needs a friend when all they do is misinterpret me?" That's often how I feel of a lot of people ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: C'est la vie

    Here is my interpretation. "It tells wonderful tales, Sad beginnings with happy endings, Lies." This line makes me believe that this person is somewhat cynical. They believe that they're are ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer's Child

    This is very beautiful and sweet. "She never saw a sickly, barren tree, for leaves nor dreams could ever fall in the time that she existed," For me this line ...

    May 6, 2015


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane