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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The end of innocence

    *sniff* ITS SO SAD!!!!!!!! This is probably one of my favorite poems. Very well written. Just one thing though: what style are you writing in? I'm trying to figure out ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Inevitable Death

    Yay! So I'm not the only one who likes to write dark works! (I have a problem....) But seriously, I really like this poem. Me jelly. I love how you ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: Poetry Anthology

    These are very good! However, I offer you a challenge. I think you should now try writing a poem in which each stanza is a full line instead of just ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: civilized savage

    Okay, please don't be offended by my opinion. It's just an opinion and you entitled to do whatever you want with your work. First, don't forget to capitalize the beginning ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Stage Fright

    Good lord, this exactly describes how I feel! When I was in musical theater I had issues with stage fright too. I agree with anticipating the fact that they're judging ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Bruises ( Chapter 1: Save Me )

    Hi. This is very well written. (It's sooooo much better than my work!) You did a great job describing the handsomeness of Ethan. I absolutely love the line, "his voice ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Game On Level 0.3

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    Jun 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: But I Still Love You

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    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Friend

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    Jun 2, 2014


Wicked people never have time for reading. It's one of the reasons for their wickedness.
— Lemony Snicket