Jadeite

Bravo! Very grand job on this poem. Greatly written, good flow and well worded. My favorite line from the poem is: 'glide through snow drifts of cherry blossoms,' Very good ...

Its not a bad poem. Well written, good flow and well worded. Very good work on this poem. I liked it and found it to be a very interesting poem.

Wow, this was a great fan fiction to read. I really enjoyed it and you seemed to have stayed true to the characters and a good storyline here. Well done! ...

Humm...I'm a bit comfused. And the bold typing really through me off. It was an ok read. Not the best I've read, but its not the worst either. Good start.

Very interesting story. I found it entertaining and a good read. Was writen well and described well. Very good writing there.

Very nice story. I really like how you expressed the feelings of victor crumb towards hermione granger. I found it very entertaining and enjoyable. Very nicely done and good work.

Wow! That was a good fan fiction story. I really enjoyed it. You seem to have been true to the characters. And the storyline was pretty well written. Nice work!

Your stories are cool. I like the dialogue you chose. And your characters sound cool and like normal teenagers, lol. Nice job!

I really enjoyed that. That was a pretty cool story to read and excellent title. I'm eager to read more of your writing. I like your style and ideas.

Very good short story. I like your decription and how you express your feelings. Job well done! You have talent growing!

Nicely written. I like how you describe the feelings of what the character sees and thinks. The description was very well done and well worded. I saw it very clearly ...

Bravo! Very grand job on this poem. It was very well worded, good flow and written well! Excellent!

Wow! You expressed your feelings and emotions very well. Excellent work! I'm really impressed with your poem.

Its a very good start. You expressed your feelings and curiosities well.

Humm...interesting poem. Nice work on it.