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Re: Skin [ Editied]
Hola there ^^. My corrections will be in varying shades of pink ^^. [quote="Sionarama"]Ron didn't want to go to the trip. Period. No questions asked. Every year Ron's family -- ...
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Twilight
May I just say right here and now: the Twilight series was O.K. Not great, not wonderful, but not a stinking pile of poo either. Really, it didn't desreve the ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Thee Ex - Boyfriend
[quote="Whitedwarf3821"]Freshmen year is said to be the hardest. Most go to a different school and may get lost . Freshman year was a total disaster. Ok, you've already said that ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Twilite Speedball (part 1)
Hola ^^. Guess I'll write you a review but word of spelling sucks. Not really my cup of tea but it was pretty good. I like how you were able ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Fourty Nine Pennies Sat on the Dining Room Table
Hola, I'll be your reviewer today ^^. May I first say, that your title caught my attention. "49 Pennies?...Huh?" XD Sweet. Okies, now on to business. "The cotton candy vendor ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: The Queen's Kingdom (rated 12+ for slight violence)
Hola^^. Guess I'll be your reviewer today. You don't have to listen to my advice if you don't want too ^^. Hmmm, let's begin eh? My corrections will have * ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello Or Goodbye?
Hola there ^^ Guess I'll be your reviser today ^^. ***** Holding hands, Laughing and Kissing. Just a normal day, At least that's what we thought. The beach is quite ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: I have Four Scars
Hola snapcracklepop, motherpupper, sonofabiscuit.... In short, I liked it a lot which is saying something cuz I'm not a big fan of poetry. The title is what caught my attention. ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: Night's Children: Chapter One, Part One.
Hola there Chenka! I'm Jackie ^ ^. First, may I say that it was pretty good. I'm courious {?} as to what will happen to your character. Now, onwards to ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Death Note Parody
1 L: Light, What are you doing in there! You've been in the bathroom for over an hour, and I have to peee! Light: Hold on, I'm just writing names ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: The End of the World: Chapter One
It was good but towards the end I got kinda confused. I mean, I knew two different people were talking but I didn't know what they looked like or who ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: The Weight of Suicide
Hola there ^ ^ First, may I say this poem was awesome. It's not a "woe-is-me" kind of poem that a teen might write ya know? And there's one line ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Wind Brother
A very good peice but it took me about half way through the story to figure out just what the narrator might be. I'm thinking a wood nymph, elf, or ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Chapter One of 'Cracks in the Sidewalk'
Liz Landry seems more like a mannequin than a mother. If you were her and an officer came to your house showing you a picture of your dead son, would ...
Apr 3, 2009