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Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 13.2
Dude, that last line was so perfect, I wasn't sure if either you were waiting to use it for so long or if you winged it as filler because you ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 30.2)
LOL Yeah, for sure, I figured this felt like first draft woes. XD So that totally makes sense and like I said, I will totally go with the flow beCAUSE ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 29.2)
Since this isn't Cassius' pov, and Ember's just gone through a Big Scare, I don't know if there's a good, organic way to include Artemesa getting mentioned Oooh yeah, that's ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Sixteen
You're very welcome!! I'm so pleased that you're still writing this whenever you get the chance, and I'm glad you've liked my reviews. :D I always look forward to reading ...
May 7, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 12.1
Ooooh, that does make sense! The queen wanted to distract him from Raddig with Resador, and that ended up making things worse hahahahaha. I like that though, that definitely makes ...
May 6, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.1
AHHH YAY!! I'm so happy hear!! That all sounds marvelous and I think you're on the right track with that thought process! YOU GOT THIS!!! *squee!!*
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.3
Is it less just "babying him" and more like society has watched him grow up and yet still see him as the little child prince from 15, 20 years ago? ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.2
I toootally know what you mean. It's SO exciting to finally write the scenes you've been thinking about for WEEKS, and I Think that's a really good thing! Keep that ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.1
Erson at 27 makes sense to me so far. He's clearly experienced enough in his duties and has a decent grasp on how to handle himself, so I think 27 ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 10.3
Yes! I think it would be fine if Raddig never appeared again. Raddig was really a huge point in Erson's and Buck's development, so the memory and events of Raddig ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 10.2
I WILL REMEMBER THAT!! And yes, I'd love to read it! :D Just ping me when you post!!
Mar 25, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 20)
LOL ALL GOOD. Thank you for the clarification, though!! I figure it's challenging juggling all of the ages and things going on at once! YES I DID A LOT . ...
Mar 19, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 18)
LOL "so openly allowed to be naughty" HE IS SO WONDERFUL
Mar 8, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 15.2)
LOL that is ACTUALLY hilarious. The rolls couldn't hit Mishal, so you threw in an archer at the end. XD omg
Feb 20, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 8.3
That makes as much sense as it needs to!! :D And like I said, it does kind of show through that you were a bit unsure as to how to ...
Feb 20, 2020