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Hey, Sky! =D Hmm... I'm going to claim this one as my own for about.. thirty minutes. Time: 12:27 PM. Grammar and First Impressions Jackie was highly aware of the ...

Heya, Connie! :P Grammar and First Impressions Something scratched in the darkness. Creep strained his eyes, but in the dim light of the low bulbs , he couldn’t see anything ...

Hi, Baer Boy! =D Round 3 little Teddiursa. Snort. Grammar and First Impressions “Your aunt and I have been looking for you for hours! Aly, tell us before you leave! ...

Hi, Connie! ^_^ I'll attempt to top Galerius' critique, but I doubt that'll happen. :lol: Grammar and First Impressions All in all, it was turning out to be a very ...

I'm ba-ack! Miss me? ^.^ And I got my kitteh! We'll critique this together. What say you? Sweet. I knew you'd understand. ^_^ Oh, dude! I can go all grammar-guru ...

Hiya, Baer Boy! I'm back in business! =D Seeing as a bunch of people got here before me, this critique might be a little weak. However, I'll give you what ...

Hey, Ashley! I'm a little rough to this critique thing now since I took such a long, necessary break. @_@ So, forgive me if this review is a little... Lost ...

Hey! Long time, no crit! :D For me anyway. xD We'll see how rusty I am, nay? :wink: This Is What I'm Talking About! This is very... depressing? Lol, I ...

Rose! I liked the general idea of this story, but the specifics is a bit confusing. Why? I don't much understand why she doesn't want Daryl there or why she ...

I'm your Number One fan. I'm totally going to print this out, frame it, and hang it on my wall for the world to see. And then, I'm going to ...

Heya, Brad! The musty scent of old leather and old wood spilled over every crack in the saloon. Behind the counter, large barrels with old spigots rested one atop the ...

Hello, lotti! ^^ I'm going to go paragraph by paragraph, color-coding everything I want to point out. Try to keep up! :wink: I foraged in the backstreets of 22nd century ...

Shiko! I'm actually going to give this crit on time. I know. It's intense. Stars. This probably isn't necessary. The next sentence gives this a kind of mystery as the ...

So, I'm 5 years late, but here's your review! I've been so busy that I've kept putting off critiques that I owe. I greatly apologize, and hopefully my review will ...

Clo! ^^ Thanks so much for entering CIA's grammar contest! Here's the special critique you deserve for entering. ^^ I really liked this story. The title was really neat, by ...