JabberHut

Hello! I'm here for yet another taste of your writing. :D Now I haven't read the first part of this chapter, but! I really like this. The end when they ...

Hello! I haven't read the aforesaid prologue, so forgive me if I suggest anything that's already taken care of in the prologue. ^_^ I do think this is a cool ...

Hello! I thought I'd stop by like I said I would. ;D Well, I think the idea is really neat! You could do a lot with this. You've got the ...

Hey, Titch! I think I read the right part 1 'cause it sounded right when I read this next. XD I admire those writers who try to tackle a story ...

Hey, Tishyy! This here's Jabber, and I thought I'd stop by to see what you have for us. Welcome to YWS by the way! Feel free to stop by the ...

Hello! I read your story here, and it's a neat idea. I think you could do a lot more to this. You have a neat style (especially with the lists), ...

Baer Boy! This story of yours? So freaking cute. I love reading your stuff. It has a certain style that I don't read so often. And I can tell you're ...

Hello! I'm not always in lyrics, but I thought I'd stop by. :D This sounds really neat just by reading it. I could kind of get the feeling for it ...

Hello! I love Greek myths, so I got excited when I spotted some Greek Mythology terms here! I think what you have is really cool, I especially like the three ...

I'm back! :D You're right, Doe! This is so much better, and I can tell you enjoyed writing this too. The crime scene was really cool and vivid! Dialogue You ...

Sorry for the wait! But I'm here now and ready to review. This sounds like the story you were talking about in chat, and I think you said this would ...

Oh, man, I'm falling behind! Chapter two's already up! Hi, Doe! :D Sorry I didn't get to this sooner (Are you sick of hearing that yet?), but I felt terrible ...

Hello! I always enjoy reading your stories 'cause they're unique compared to the majority of other stories here on YWS. Props to you for tackling something original! I think this ...

Hello! This sounds like a history essay, and I was never the best with those for some reason. (Never made the teacher happy, I guess?) But I do know a ...

Hi again! :D Before I begin, here's a link to Rosey Unicorn 's article titled, Punctuation Marks . Take a look at the "dashes" section. You've been misusing those, but ...