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Re: Make the Best, and Shake the Least
Hello! Awesome piece you have! It took me a minute to figure out what the song was saying. I got it at the beginning, but then I think I found ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: .
Once again, I am here! Your poetry is so wonderful. I really, really liked this one. It's sad and made my heart go, "omg no D:" but that's a good ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Assassin's Novice: The City of Rain
Hello! Wonderful to meet you, Assassin! :D (Out of context, that sounds like I'm asking for bad news.) So I'll admit that I'm not very good at noticing and wanting ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: [deleted]
Hello again, AJ! This'll be my 711th review. Is that cool or what? I should go get a smoothie or something. What do they sell there ? Gas... Anyway! Another ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: .
Hi, AJ! I'm here to review this prettyful poem that had me exploding with confetti, sprinkles, and rainbows. 8] So as I've said before, this poem was very pretty. I ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The Elephant and the Donkey despise the Anteater
Hey, Lies! How're things shakin'? Certainly a very colorful piece! ;) So while the profanity is almost distracting (and no doubt there are songs out there as colorful as this), ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Songbirds
Hello, Jaetwee! :D I really, really liked this. I wish I could've heard the music 'cause I most certainly felt some beat in my head. I'm hearing some guitar with ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor (Part 3)
Hello again! Sorry about the delay, but I am here now. :D The end made me sad. But only because it stopped right when you were starting something new. xD ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor (Part 2)
Hello again, Mama Lama! :D This definitely felt like a large history lesson. This can be good and bad, of course! It's definitely wonderful if it plays a role in ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor.
Hey there! You have an amazing grasp on vocabulary and imagery. I've been most impressed with how you described pictures. Very awesome, and much kudos to you! It's an area ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Prophecy Maker
Hi, Berlynn! Happy Review Day! :D So this is a pretty awesome idea. I think you've got a great story growing in your mind! There are some points which need ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: I'll Come to Thee by Moonlight
Hey there, Sassy! ;) So since this is unedited, I'll spare you any thoughts on style. xD It was a fun little story though! I can imagine how much fun ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Banana Bread Pudding
LAVATAR.
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 3: Remembering) and Chapter 4
Hello once again, Jasper! Sorry it's a little late. I figured since it was already put off by a couple days, I'd wait for Review Day! I'll be surprised if ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Suffocating
Hi, Lies! Very neat song you have here! You've got some great imagery going on -- awesome metaphors. Granted, the song's message is not so awesome. xD It makes me ...
Jul 27, 2011
