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Re: be the resistance
Heya, Krusha! So this was a neat piece, and I liked the message written in the song! It's very obvious, but you played with it very well so it wasn't ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Old Man
Hey, Joshua! Sorry it took me longer than planned. The other day, I decided it's just been long enough to where waiting for the Review Day wouldn't hurt too much ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Till we meet again
DRAMALLAMA! I'm totes here as promised. [here is where I tell you i'm not a poet so heads up] This is a very sweet poem, and I can tell, as ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Dance
Hi, Teddy! [insert I'm-not-much-of-a-poet warning here] I very much liked your poem. It was short and sweet. Your imagery was beautiful too. You painted an extremely gorgeous setting -- the ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: When The Moon Will Rise Tonight
Hello there! I very much enjoyed your piece. You have some awesome imagery, and I actually liked the repetition of the line "When the moon will rise tonight." I dunno ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Garden
Hello again, Rachel! :D I really enjoyed your song here. It seriously made me extremely happy probably because you kept the garden theme through the entire song. I love those ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Touchless
Hey, Disgrace! Here as I said I would be! :D You've got a neat story idea brewing here! I'm certainly interested in just what's going on. I'm worried for the ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hi, Lele! I'm here as I mentioned I would be! This song was pretty cool! I wouldn't say it lived up to the previous poem I read of yours (the, ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Mental Segregation
Hello again! I just seem to be stopping by a lot of your works, haven't I? You're very good though, and I look forward to reading more. Honestly, it's rejuvenating ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey, Lele! I see you've already got all sorts of reviews, so hopefully I'll say something new? Overall, I like where you're going with this. It's not very original, but ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Skeleton Who Cries Blood
Hello again, Lies! This was actually really neat to read. You had some awesome parallels between stanzas, and the imagery was really cool! I personally find all the language distracting. ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: On My Own
Hi, Megan! Great to see you on YWS! :D I really enjoyed your song. It sounded unique enough to me that I was interested in its message. Maybe it's the ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Written In This Skin
Galeeerius! So I got a good night's sleep and figured I'd review this immediately! Okay, well. Apparently, I'm still waking up. But at least I'm thinking a little more sanely ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: A Forgiveness Song
Hey there, Timothy! I absolutely love your song and the message that comes with it. I relate to it so much. Very beautiful in that sad kind of way. A ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: The House on Mango Street
It's been ages since I read A House On Mango Street, so I didn't remember much of it. After reading this though, it started coming back to me in bits ...
Aug 8, 2011
