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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twelve
Good morning! LOL Zoltar sass coming in strong today omg. I love this. LOL Then she answers his either/or question with "maybe" omg. She's as flustered as he is at ...
Jul 1, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eleven
Good morning! So I have to say, while Zoltar here is pinned down and Lady Wisp Talon is stalling for time or something, I just love that you put so ...
Jun 30, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 6
HELLO! Sorry this took so long. :D omg these two are adorable. GRAMS. so SASSY. I looked blankly at her, “About the necklace… And also, why are we even here? ...
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 5
BACK FOR REVIEWING EDITS :D I don't think I mentioned this before, but this: Then another room was the Visual Reality room. Search it up if you don’t know what ...
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 4
I'm here to review the edits! At least, I think I only saw edits in the part where they arrived at the estate. I didn't notice any changes earlier on ...
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Ten
GOOD MORNING! Bahahaha, walrus snores. I think Zoltar was sleeping at the cave entrance. I remember him staring at the night sky before he slept. Maybe I'm wrong though. I'm ...
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nine
HELLO!! This review might sound a bit sporadic 'cause I have to stop mid-way, so just fair warning! SO FIRST OFF it would be awesome to get that kind of ...
Jun 28, 2019 -
Re: Earth to the Moon (1)
YAY THERE'S MORE!! And a new character too! I already love how this starts. Such a smooth introduction here and already getting a feel for her spontaneous, go-with-the-flow nature. A ...
Jun 27, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eight
GOOD MORNING! omg poor Zoltar has to sleep at home now without Nira. Naturally, he'd be thinking about her. omg.
Jun 27, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 5
D'awww Izzy is adorable, but I'm still a little confused as to if she's shy or not. Like, these two haven't met before, right? Only via phone. And Julia isn't ...
Jun 26, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seven
Hello again!! OKAY. So my first thought here is what I mentioned last chapter, where Hisster has knowledge of these guys that Zoltar clearly does not. He would PROBABLY share ...
Jun 26, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Barn
Ohhhh, I like this. And now I really wish I had read Brave New World. I understand it enough though to appreciate the reference. I wonder if you'll continue to ...
Jun 25, 2019 -
Re: Faery Favour (2)
I should not be this upset that part two is not in Adria's voice. SHOULD NOT BE THIS UPSET. If I could draw, I would create fan-art of Adria. Gosh, ...
Jun 25, 2019 -
Re: Faery Favour (1)
Hello! I saw this sitting in the Green Room, and I'm surprised it hasn't been looked at yet. So I sat here and read it and I just really have ...
Jun 25, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 4
Bahahaha, I love this whirlwind trip to the store to buy gifts. It feels super last minute, but I wonder if this entire trip was rather last minute. I could ...
Jun 25, 2019
