JabberHut

Hello, there! I'll give you a nice crit -- hopefully before I have to eat. We'll see. ^^ Big Ben sounded in the distance , echoing through out the thin ...

Hello again! Let's see what I can get done before the bell rings! :lol: Very short, sweet, and to the point. The no capitalization thing isn't really bugging me. It ...

Hello, there! I was just browsing the forums and found your unreplied piece of work here. And now I think I see why. :D I'll give you an overall critique ...

Hi! Sorry for the wait, but I'm critting this like I promised. :D I apologize for repeating anything the others have said before me. ^^ Lethero looked over the temporary ...

Hi there! It's been ages since I saw some of your work, even if it is for a class. :wink: Well, you sure mastered your punctuation here. I have no ...

Hello there, Choco! Must I repeat what everyone said about critting lyrics? Lol, I don't critique them much. But! I really liked this! Great imagery, and by the end, I ...

Hello, there! Sorry if I repeat anything the others have said before me. ^_^ My hair was drenched; [comma instead] the hood on my sweatshirt wet all the way through. ...

Hello, there! Someone mentioned this, so I thought I'd take a peek. ^^ I may repeat things people have said. I never know if the post is edited or not. ...

Oh, Kylan! You just made me happy! :D I haven't read Honor in forever and a day. You made my day! Again! *hugs* *clears throat* Right.. the crit! :D An ...

Hello, there! Thank you very much for entering the On Fire contest hosted by the Instructors. I do hope you enjoyed writing this as much as we enjoyed giving you ...

You can post two! You can post five thousand, and I wouldn't mind! :D I see Azila and Phorcys beat me, but I'll still critique and if I repeat anything, ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! If any questions, don't hesitate to PM me. I'm more than happy to assist. You have a cute little poem here. It made me smile. ...

I guess it's useless to repeat what Suz and Snoink said. :lol: I liked it, considering the assignment. Watch your punctuation, though. In an assignment this strict and having an ...

Inside, there was the largest room I had seen thus far on my earlier “tour” of the ship. You walk into a room. The beginning of this is weird because ...

Hello! :) I read the poem, and I truly loved it. I can't find the words to describe it, but I really did love it. Let's see what I can ...