JabberHut

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I thought I would stop by and take a peek at what you've presented us! :D First, let me share our wonderful Eleven Commandments of YWS ...

Hi again! I'm back from supper, so I shall type up this critique now! :D Sorry for the quick closure of the last critique. If you have any questions, you ...

Hello! Thanks for PMing about this! I'd be more than happy to critique this for you! :wink: Grammar and First Impressions My sweater is only a thin barrier against the ...

Hi, JFW! Grammar and First Impressions “Meagan!” my mom calls from deep within the house, her voice bouncing off the high ceilings, [no comma] and [s]the[/s] wooden walls. Sounds better. ...

Hello! Thought I'd stop by and take a peek at what you've presented us! :D Grammar and First Impressions In the darkness, the citizens of Auzstine couldn’t tell [s]what[/s] which ...

Hello, Eimear! Sorry it took me a moment to get to this; I had a prior commitment, but we're all good now. Let's get this show on the roll! 8) ...

Brad! I feel honored you asked me for a review! I shall do my best to give you a full-out critique of which I promised. :wink: I'm going to copy ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! :D The woman who now sat on the other side of the table with her was a small Latina woman, [no comma] with dark curly ...

Easy! Grammar and First Impressions I am standing on a beach, where instead of sand I squish my toes into smooth, blue, crystal like pebbles. This sounds clunky and could ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I am Jabber, and I will be your critic for the next however long it will take! My first act for today is reference to the ...

3B! It makes me happy you posted in my review thread 'cause I was going to read this anyway. :lol: I just enjoy your writing that much. *stretches arms out* ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS, seeing as I haven't welcomed you in your first post; and if I did, well double-welcome! :D Grammar and First Impressions I'm going to hopefully skip ...

Hello! I thought I'd stop by and see what you've got here, especially if you're so certain it's not our typical vampire romance. :wink: Grammar and First Impressions I breathe ...

Hello, and welcome to the lovely YWS! I am me, your critic for this moment. For my first act, I would like to inform you of what's called the Two ...

Hello, Claire Snoad! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you've made yourself at home here. It looks like you are [or maybe you're not] aware of the review ratio. Two ...