JSFord97

Even though this is so simple, the effects are greatly magnified. I love how each sentence is so short for impact and emphasis and the use of repetition - let, ...

This is very very good!! It really caught my attention straight off and my gaze never left it. The detailed descriptions and imagery is what makes it so good. You ...

Hey!! This is really good!! I really like it! The rhythm and syllable pattern is consistent and it flows really well. I can tell that behind the lyrics there is ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this, particularly the vocabulary and the emotion behind it. Through the words, you have expressed very deep feeling and thought throughout the poem. It seems like ...

Haha, i like this!! Anyone at any age can relate to this which is good! I particularly enjoyed how you wrote it, as if you're in bed at that moment ...

I really love this!! The imaginative imagery and descriptions are just beautiful. Especially how mend and entwine everything together. Personally, I would keep the rhyming, it adds something extra to ...

Howdy!! Your poem has an amazing poetic structure to it, I especially enjoyed the rhyming and imagery and the slight repetition of the first line on each stanza. It gives ...

Hey!! I really liked this, especially the repetition of 'some words' and the structure of it. I really enjoyed the first three sentences, it seemed like you thought them through ...